1. Is it clear what kind of tone the script is achieving?
2. Are the script prose vivid enough to be inspire imagery within readers’ heads, but short enough to not be boring?
3. Are the right technical definitions used in order to work properly as a production draft?
4. Do you think the story feels fleshed out, is it clear about where we are in time?
5. What could the script do more with, and do less with?
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